for my concrete details i am going to be useing are: first when lady bracknell is talking with jack and saying how he is not on the list of elidigble men. then my comentaryies for it will be how it shows that the kids dont get to pick who they marry. then how it shows that maarrige is a bussiness. my next concrete detail is the saying that divorces are made in heaven. then my comentaries for it will be that it shows that once you are married you are married untill one of the people dies. and that it also shows how divorces were looked down upon during the victorian era. my last concrete detail is when cecily is talking about how she wants to marry ernest because of his name. dthen my comentaries for it will be that it shows how marrige is not always about love but simple things like names. then this also shows that marriges are a thing that help raise your social standings by how cecily feels bad for any marrided to someone not named ernest is kind of one uping everyone else which would raise her social standings.
then for my three fold transitional sentence will be: Men, women, each have their expectations set by society which may be good or bad, but they are also brought to each other through society.
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good job. way to make the concrete details separate enough that they can all contribute, but not seem like the same point repeated! myabe for your 3 fold transition. you could incorporate marriage instead of just saying "through society"
ReplyDeleteI am also using the part where girls marry for the name Earnest, but it is just going to be brief so I think it will tie in to your paragraph without repeating. Good job.
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